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Friday, October 13, 2006

My Nightmare Vacation

It was eight o'clock at night and it was Friday, October 13. I was with my friends camping in Chestnuts, a camping site. We had stayed at the worst cabin. It was (1)old, smelly, and humid. When we got there, we realized we had forgotten all our food so we searched in the little fridge of the kitchen and we found (2)a cheese, a bread, and a carrot. We tried preparing descent food with that stuff but we just wasted it because at the end it was an ugly food mix.


The next day we were really bored so we tried organizing some activities to keep us entertained so we went on a walk to the lake and decided to do the activites there. (3)We swam, we raced, and we climbed trees. The only thing we won from doing that was getting really tired and sweaty. We lied on the grass and rested there. Luckily, a friend had brought a (4)basket with juice, ham and cheese sandwiches, and Oreo cookies. We were chatting on the grass when a friend noticed she didn't have her watch. She was worried because it was new and it had been a birthday present so we started looking around for it. (5)Under a pile of brownish leaves, we found it. It was dirty and muddy and we didn't know how it had got there but we didn't care. We decided to go back to the cabin. (6)Picking up the basket, we made our way back to the ugly cabin.


When we got there, we saw our cabin in a real mess. (7)Whenever my friend is in a messy place, she gets all crazy and she wants to organize it as soon as possible. (8)Yes, this time she got really crazy with this mess because everything was upside down and all the papers that were lying in the cabin were thrown around. We were really scared because we didn't know how it had happened. Then we remembered we had left the window open so the house could get some fresh air and we hadn't remembered to close it. We picked up everything and put it back in order. A couple of days passed and we were still bored. Finally, it was October 15, the day our vacations would finally come to an end. My friend's dad came to pick us up. Altough we had a really bad vacation, we would never forget that special Friday 13.

1- Series of Modifiers
2- Series of Phrases
3- Series of Independent Clauses
4- Series of Objects
5- Introductory Prepositional Phrase
6- Introductory Participial Phrase
7- Introductory Adverb Clause
8- Introductory Yes, No, and Interjections

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